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Dhdfhd F
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:02 pm Post subject: Plz revise the short paragraph plz its urgent thx

Okonoko, the protagonist of Things Fall Apart, is a rigorous, yet notable wrestler in his clan, Umofia. He is a “man of action” who loathes indolent people as his son, Nwoye, and father, Unoka. Okonko always exposes Nwoye’s fault, and hopes his son to succeed in life as himself. However, Okonko loves his family deep down his heart and believes that his bitten words somehow help his children be better people. Unfortunately, he is a lack of expressing his feeling to others and. Okonko makes a foolish mistake of being the one killing his adopted son, Ikemefuna. He is warm hearted and an adorable child to Okonko and Nwoye. Since Okonko recklessly destroys the special relationship between him and Ikemefuna, Okonko’s life soon turns to tragedy. He always thinks of his adopted son involuntary yet cannot escape the tragic moment of his adopted son’s death. Furthermore, Okonko faces tragedy day after day after the death of Ikemefuna such as finding that Enoch, Okonko’s gifted daughter, is demon possessed. Also, Okonko is exiled for seven years in Mbaino after accidently shooting his honourable friend’s son. Therefore, Okonko is a tragic hero who kills himself after facing affliction.

Rob
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:05 pm Post subject:

blah blah blahits good

~Lucky~
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:05 pm Post subject:

wow, its perfect. 2 thumbs up!

Ryan B
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:05 pm Post subject:

its good, YOU SHOULD PUBLISH THAT!!!!!!!!!

Hildegardis Bingensis
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:07 pm Post subject:

Too long to revise.All titles must be underlined, He is a lack of expressing ... poor grammar usagespell and grammar check 1st and underline all titles.

you asked... i answered
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:07 pm Post subject:

do your homework yourself, and ask a classmate to proofread it. Asking others to do it for you will not help you.

BILLY MAYS
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:09 pm Post subject:

Wow, this sucks.He is a “man of action” who loathes indolent people as his son, Nwoye, and father, Unoka. Okonko always exposes Nwoye’s fault, and hopes his son to succeed in life as himself. However, Okonko loves his family deep down his heart and believes that his bitten words somehow help his children be better people. Unfortunately, he is a lack of expressing his feeling to others and. - this whole section doesn't make any sense. The rest of it makes sense, but just plain sucks. Learn to write.

laceandcurls
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:14 pm Post subject:

So your homework assignment was to get on the internet and have someone else do your work? Things sure have changed since I was in school.

Vanessa V
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:27 pm Post subject:

here i tried... u were on track, u just had a couple of grammar errors lol hoped i helped in timeOkonoko, the protagonist of Things Fall Apart, is a rigorous, yet notable wrestler in his clan, Umofia. He is a “man of action” who loathes indolent people such as his son, Nwoye, and father, Unoka. Okonko purposely exposes Nwoye’s faults in hopes that his son will succeed in life like himself. However deep down inside, Okonko truly loves his family and believes that his harsh words will somehow help his children become better people. Unfortunately, Okonko is the tragic hero whose fatal flaws are pride and his inability to express his emotions. As a result this leads Okonko to make a foolish mistake of killing Ikemefuna, warm hearted and an adorable child to Okonko and Nwoye, to a scarf ice to the Gods (I think that’s how it goes). Since Okonko recklessly destroys the special relationship between him and Ikemefuna, Okonko’s life soon turns to tragedy. Afterwards Okonko is tanted by the loss of his adopted son by mourning and recalling the night of Ikemefuna’s death. Moreover, Okonko faces even more tragedy after the death of Ikemefuna such as finding that Enoch, Okonko’s gifted daughter, is possessed by a demon. Furthermore, Okonko is exiled for seven years in Mbaino after accidently shooting his honorable friend’s son. In the end, Okonko, the tragic hero, kills himself after facing affliction.

mab
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 3:33 pm Post subject:

I've never read this story and have no idea if what you said is accurate or even spelled correctly, but here's my attempted revision. Please don't copy and paste it directly. It isn't fair to waste fifteen minutes of my day doing your homework. Try to learn something about grammar and sentence structure from what I did and try to incorporate it into your writing. Again, please change some of this to make it your own and don't just copy and paste. Thanks and good luck with your future English assignments.Okonko, the protagonist of _Things_Fall_Apart_, is a distinguished wrestler within the Umofia clan. He is a "man of action" who loathes the indolent nature of people such as his son Nwoye and uncle Unoka. He relentlessly criticizes his son's faults, believing his bitter words will help his children to succeed and become better people. Underneath his rough exterior, Okonko harbors a deep love for his family and only truly wants the best for them. Unfortunately he has a hard time expressing this and never acknowledges his special relationship with his adopted son Ikemefuna who he tragically kills. His actions haunt him throughout his life and he cannot escape the horrible moment of his son's death. Okonko's life continues to be plagued with tragedy and he learns that his gifted daughter Enoch is demon possessed and accidentally shoots his honorable friend's son. He's consequently exiled to Mbaino for seven years and in the end takes his own life, making him the indisputable tragic hero of the story.

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