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I just wrote this poem, what do you think?

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Author Message Madison Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:46 pm    Post subject: It's a good poem. I love making poems myself. Back to top Cait Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:46 pm    Post subject: Interesting...I'm not a huge fan of rhyming poems. I think poets often try to hard to rhyme but this was okay. Back to top bk424bk Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: i guess its not badbut i see no point to it at allit doesnt really make sense Back to top LoveR Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: i like the 1st line but thats about it.SORRY!.... Back to top Nikitaa B Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: no point, too many topics and the middle two lines dont make much sense.sorry Back to top BRAD LESTER ROCKS -WAR EA Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: its good but if you dont mind me asking what does it mean? Back to top Chico Sanchez Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: Dont listen to douchebags one and two. It was great! Back to top The Madhatter Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: i think its good, these other people are just saying it sucks cuz there jealous and think there being funngy Back to top Jeff Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: Don't give up your day job just yet! Back to top SunnyK Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: Well the beginning was good but then it got confusing. If you really want to pursue poetry than go for it, I do think you have a knack for it. Oh and don't listen to what people say, I have studied a bit of poetry and it does not always have to rhyme, it only has to fall under the same category. Back to top simplyfresh23 Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:47 pm    Post subject: I like it i just don't get the why have you bitten me devil part? ya get ridof that Back to top EuKaRyOTiKA Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:48 pm    Post subject: i cant quite get what your poem is about. It sounds cool when read out loud though.Lmao at the first answerer. sorry but that was funny. Back to top Cia Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:48 pm    Post subject: It was awesome. Back to top Summer Time Roxs Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:48 pm    Post subject: no wander that dude that said "super shitty" name is need help he dont understand real potery. my comment is it was freakin awsome keep on wrighting dont listen to ppl like that they know nothing Back to top Randall E Yahoo User Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:48 pm    Post subject: Alas?Actually this has promise. It's not ready for prime time but it's salvageable. What are you trying to say? Figure that out - it's not clear to the reader. And please eliminate the most trite of your imagery - the wine, the blindness and sight....But keep working on it. There are interesting phrases in it and it's not too long.That's the most favorable critique I've given on Y/A. Back to top

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