I just wrote this poem, what do you think?
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icee&frosty
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 Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:49 pm Post subject: |
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| Deep, I had to read it twice though, I didn't understand it!!!! xox |
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Creative Genius
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| Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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| Let me guess the meaning:you were sitting outside with friends and enjoying the weather.dancing and listening to good musicyou were having drinks of wine and spirits.you should not be drinking cuz you act foolish when you drink too muchyou could not resist this temptationand now you blame it on the devil.how was that?CG |
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Noina luvs yah!
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| Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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| I think it's brilliant!I'm going to steal it and call it my own! |
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wedy320@verizon.net
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| Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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| even that it don't make since for you it is nice and i give you credit for it because you have good thinking you should be proud of you good luck in the next one |
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ross_maekawa
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| Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 9:17 pm Post subject: |
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| your peom is not that bad,at least it is not too sad.Try using the words you think,and it will fall into sink.I have a deep love for poetry,it is the love that most don't see.So keep doing what you do,and you will see what comes true.Thank you for the love,Poerty from above.Keep it going friend. |
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