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Author Message TD Euwaite™ Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:49 pm    Post subject: Do you like my new poem, Father Al? *****Father Al and the Christ MassLittle sleepers bedtime fidget,Peeking at the packagesThat are piled round the tree,Race cars, guitarsAnd a purse that matches withThe shoes you got, a birthday giftAnd the other’s Christmas wish,Ribbon wrapped deliciousnessA peace we can’t forget,And on this day we celebrateThe gift for those who will repentThe Heaven sent, son of God was born***** Back to top Zack G Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:51 pm    Post subject: its good Back to top abcd_100400 Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:51 pm    Post subject: I"d say VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!! Back to top summerGirl Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:51 pm    Post subject: im in love..... Back to top chelseaheartsalex Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:52 pm    Post subject: i hope no one steals this & copywrites it orsomething buddy.:)ur poem sounds upbeat & fun jolly hehe. writings fun huh. hahah. Back to top Reenie from 86riverside Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:14 pm    Post subject: AMEN! Beautiful....awesome! The "boy" says he doesn't want anything for Christmas except to be home... and help paying his air-fare! Glad my sis still has little ones to enjoy the fancy packages! For adults it's just another visit to the check book or charge....God Bless the babes!Wonderful, wonderful poem, TD, Thank you.PS. My Uncle Al has been more like a father to me in the last 20 years than his own brother, my father! God Bless father AL!! Back to top Clevelanding Yahoo User Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 11:26 pm    Post subject: I thought it was an excellent Christmas poem.To remember the peace experienced on any day, is appealing to me. Back to top TWOBOB Yahoo User Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:59 am    Post subject: Silly soft sentimental smooth.I! --Liked it. Back to top

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