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a little bit of this Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:48 am Post subject: What Do You Think Of This Poem? |
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| I stare at the bagThe one you left behindI put it in the closetPull it to my chestHide it under the bedYet, I know it’s thereHaunting and taunting meThe shampoo is yours nowI will never use it againThe scent too much to bareYou lit my murky watersWith your match of truthA deep fire within meBurning the most valuableOf my possessionsBut you blew out the flameWith just one of your breathsI inhale just onceWhy waste the airThat was your pillowHolding the impression of youLike clay that’s been moldedI pretend you left To gather my morning needsMore milk than coffeeNow, I will have to explainSomeday, maybe, to anotherI crawl under the sheetsImagining you will followIt was not meIt was himMeeting the desire You so longed forPerhaps the secret of it allWas where your mind would wanderYou will read Desnos to him nowWine loosening your tongueTo examine FelliniAll that I thought was mineNow a gift to anotherThe evasive answers The mix up in timeThat’s where your heart landedShower waters can no longerWash this hurt from meCommercials misleadIt does not get rid of the grimeMy eyes scan the marble cellPerhaps your shampoo Will wash you away |
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Setsuna Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:54 am Post subject: |
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| I love it! |
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PG with baby #2 Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:54 am Post subject: |
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| Excellent poemp.s. You are better off without him |
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gilljeet Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:59 am Post subject: |
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| you need to get a life.. |
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Barbara E from Houston Te Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:05 am Post subject: |
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| It's very moving and touching. It's the story of a person hurting from the breakup of a great love story. Very common and yet always poignant.A broken heart can heal, you have to want it to, though!God Bless and Good Luck! |
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ciao.italia08 Yahoo User
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:50 am Post subject: |
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| that was amazing.i love the stanza "wine loosening you tongue" and "shower waters can no longer wash this hurt from me"ciao |
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