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Jeff L
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 Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:37 pm Post subject: What do you think of this poem? |
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| Pride, like wine, is good in moderation,filling your soul with a healthy zest for life,setting free your shackled passions for the world to beholdA gift from the god's; sweet nectar of lifethe sensual world's magic potionTake it enough and your fully alivetoo much and your lost in the oceanThe ocean of pleasure thats never enoughbut always just what you desirecraving more and more you get what you wantyour soul is the fuel for the fire |
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BitterSweetLullaby
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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| I really enjoyed this poem. Very uplifting! Idk I felt a little soothed after reading it. And the point of it is actually very valid. |
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| Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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| That's great my friend. I really like your poem.Keep it up . May God bless you and rewars you with new fresh idea and share to the world. |
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